Challenge : Amin Sadegvand : Iran

29 July - 15 Sep 2006, sponsored by Vertus, Duber Studio, Di-o-matic, ambientLight

Postby damseremie » 08 Sep 2006, 13:46

The concept is excellent and ur rendition thus far is great. its a good thing we see wip so that we know how much work goes in.
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Postby Amin CG » 08 Sep 2006, 18:29

I'm going to render my final design in 2400x1800

resolution. Is that OK?
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Postby ashras99 » 08 Sep 2006, 20:39

Amin CG wrote:I'm going to render my final design in 2400x1800

resolution. Is that OK?



absolutely fine..no problem.
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Postby Amin CG » 10 Sep 2006, 10:37

Hi dear friends , :D

This is a test render of my design.

It is becoming complete.

I had to make some changes in the sky again as it was not what I was

looking for. I hope that's fine now.
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update

Postby Amin CG » 12 Sep 2006, 07:22

Hi :D

I have also added a human figure to my design to make the scene more

striking.

I hope it's fine.
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Render Test

Postby Amin CG » 12 Sep 2006, 07:27

This is a render of my project too ( WIP )[/img]
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Postby silvia » 12 Sep 2006, 22:46

The addition of the character adds interest to the scene. Did you actually model it from scratch? And the robe was done with a cloth simulation?
Nice atmospheric effect with the moon light.

I suggest you put a light to go with the torch.
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Postby Amin CG » 13 Sep 2006, 15:48

Thanks for your comments :D
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Postby ashras99 » 13 Sep 2006, 17:02

Nice addition but human is not visible much, i think as silvia said add light to go with torch for more better result.

I also want to know model created from sketch? And you have used any plugin for the cloth?
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Postby warpv » 13 Sep 2006, 17:26

I can't see anything! :( The only thing I can see is the moon effect, which is really nicely done btw! But the rest is so dark, I can't even see the new character in the scene...
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Postby Amin CG » 13 Sep 2006, 18:42

model created from sketch
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Postby Amin CG » 13 Sep 2006, 18:48

Hi :D

This is another scene from my concept sketch.

I hope that it will be good.

I am looking to hear you soon.
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Postby ashras99 » 13 Sep 2006, 19:15

I think the only problem in the scene is lighting because blood splash, skulls is hardly visible. This is very good and highly detailed work but due to lightling not properly visible.

For grass you used fur as shown in wIP and using lots of memory/rendering time but that also not shown.

I suggest work on lighting. Hope you get other comments too.
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Postby juanmanuel » 13 Sep 2006, 20:37

If you solve the lighting as Ashras says, the world will obtain a very beautiful image. Frightening, but beautiful
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Postby Amin CG » 14 Sep 2006, 10:22

thank you
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