Challenge: Ales Ruzicka: Singapore

21 Jan - 15 March 2007, sponsored by Wacom, Hyperfocal Design, Realviz, ambientLight, 3d.sk, Environment-textures.com, Duber Studio and Its Art Mag

Postby mat » 05 Mar 2007, 21:38

The hair looks much better and the color is very realistic!
Perhaps you could darken the pupils some more to make it more real too!
Good work!
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Postby Aztan » 05 Mar 2007, 22:43

Hi man... your work is looking good.
About the fire I´m not sure but I think that you should try the particles or maybe use one of the particles/flame image and paste into one or more plains with a degree of transparency and fake the fire.
That would be the quickest/cheapest way (at least that I can think of)

Good luck man.
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Postby dijgoho » 07 Mar 2007, 14:56

Hi,
thank you for the comments, I improved the skin bit...
Here is the composited Joan, no hair included no, because the rendering time is long...

Please tell me what you thing and also if the overall proportions are right...
THX
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Postby dijgoho » 07 Mar 2007, 14:59

here is the background...
I will change the sky color, probably put a gradient or make darker
So far everything is done in max... No bitmap for the background was used.
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Postby Star_Scream » 07 Mar 2007, 18:12

I think her shoulders are too wide i mean they are too wide for a womans body.
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Postby dijgoho » 08 Mar 2007, 15:09

Hi, I worked on the background, so here is the modified background....
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Postby dijgoho » 09 Mar 2007, 14:29

here is more update...Joan is placed in the stack of wood and she is on fire...

I am going to do more tweaking to the fire... Hope you like it :D
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Postby dijgoho » 10 Mar 2007, 03:55

Hi,
I have done more tweaking to the fire...here is the update...I also might do some tweaking to the wood material to make it look like it is more on fire :D
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Postby dijgoho » 12 Mar 2007, 03:19

more update....I added a burning texture to the wood stack and darken the fire a bit
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Postby Drave » 12 Mar 2007, 04:30

ur doing good, good luck for the final composition.
"the best is yet to be"
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Postby Star_Scream » 12 Mar 2007, 11:02

I am missing the fire on her feet there must be fire because it can't burn from the middle of the wood :D but when it burns from there, i would make her cloth burned up hope you know what i'm talking about hehe
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Postby bustedgame » 12 Mar 2007, 14:25

Hey dijgoho .... are u using environment gizmo for fire ......... ?? the fire looks like if burning into a virtual sphere ................. and it will be good if u add a few more woods down there ..................
I am a learner ...............

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Postby damseremie » 12 Mar 2007, 15:15

The head is looking really good, nice work
3D........ TOTALLY
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Postby dijgoho » 13 Mar 2007, 08:50

Hi,

Thank you for the comments...I am not using Gizmo for this...It is done using particles...
I composited the Background with Joan...In the next image I will post the work with lights...
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Postby dijgoho » 13 Mar 2007, 08:52

I moved the fire bit down to make it look more believable. I am not using GI in this image because the rendering time for the final big image would be around 10 hours, because of the particles, instead I am using standard lights , to shorten the rendering time.
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