Challenge: Ilamina-Eremie Idamiebi: Nigeria

[ashras99]

you are quite inactive in your and other threads too. Hope you know this WIP challenge and need to share views, ideas, critiques and comments with other participants of the challenge too.

[damseremie]

Sorry that i havent been too active in threads. Its bcause i dont have an internet connection and only spend limited time on the internet every 2 or 3 days in which i try 2 do so many things. Meanwhile herd are d updates

[damseremie]

Am working to finish, ull have more updates 2 day or 2 morrow

[Jassar]

Pretty good man!
is that snow on the ground? if so it's too shiny, if not then it's good

Cheers!

[XFRAME]

good work, although I believe that it lacks to improve the snow, in addition I believe that not to have snow around the fire.

[Paco_Morales]

Fabulous work so far !!

[geostik]

the ground has noise on it i thing but its too small...try mix noise with something else and also add geometry to your scene not just a bump map. maybe let the asfalt/concrete be seen on some parts (like near the fire) and i am curious where is the fire light source in the scene... i think its too high(it should be , in my opinion, in the bucket itself) and is it the only light source ?!?! Two more things bothers me : the trash can(add texture to it-rust or something cos its too perfect) and the electric cables, they need more poligons-this should be a photoreal image so no need to cut down the polys.
Good luck with your work ..hope you have the time to do the finishing touches

[damseremie]

thanks for all ur corrections. have made some adjustments.. bumped the snow, so i'll see if i have time to correct any other flaws,else this could be my final render.

Paco Morales,thanks , ill see if i have enough time for a re-render.

[damseremie]

i couldnt re-render.... no time.But i made a few minor corrections like the map that was skewed on d wall. so heres my final.
thanks all and good luck in voting

[Drave]

good job, u've really done it beautiofully