Challenge:Shane Higgins,South Africa

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Postby Shane » 12 Jul 2006, 07:29

Hi
Okay mense,time to rip it apart.
Before I carry on to the final render,does anyone see something that
hurts their eyes.All crits welcome.
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Postby FMaree » 12 Jul 2006, 09:42

Nope, all seems ok from my POV. I just hope the left part of the scene will lighten up so one can see what is hidden there (the crystal ball maybe?).
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Postby Shane » 12 Jul 2006, 10:15

Yip,I'll lighten the left up a little.
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Postby ashras99 » 12 Jul 2006, 11:24

I think whole scene required a more better lighting. Use SSS on the candles so lighting up the base too. Good work but require more better lighting.
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Postby warpv » 12 Jul 2006, 12:12

Modeling, textures, etc. I think are real good. But like the guys said, work a bit on lighting and it's going to come out great! Keep us posted!
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Postby juanmanuel » 12 Jul 2006, 12:54

Apart from what has already been said, the candle's light do not seem to be illuminating. Loooking good, looking good!
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Postby ashras99 » 14 Jul 2006, 16:43

Any update ?
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Postby Paco_Morales » 19 Jul 2006, 02:24

keep up the good work, and good luck Shane :D
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Postby Shane » 20 Jul 2006, 12:49

Hey guys
I took advice from those that responded and touched up the image alittle.
I wont be able to take advantage of the extension as I only have free time until monday.So...here she is.Good luck to all.
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Postby juanmanuel » 20 Jul 2006, 13:46

Beautiful rendition! I wish you all the luck!
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Postby thhcreate » 20 Jul 2006, 13:49

it's very beautiful and very thoughtful.

very good luck to you.
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Postby ashras99 » 20 Jul 2006, 14:18

is this final one?

Then we need high resolution one.
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Postby FMaree » 20 Jul 2006, 17:55

Excellent. Good luck with the voting.
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Postby Shane » 21 Jul 2006, 06:32

Hi I sent the final to ezine@cgarena.com
I recieved an autoresponse,so I pressumed it went through.
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Postby kiveun » 21 Jul 2006, 18:04

Really nice picture there. Nothing to crit. Good luck for the voting phase. :wink:
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