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Postby scandal » 16 Mar 2006, 10:15

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Postby ashras99 » 16 Mar 2006, 11:36

Which animal is this?

Modelling of head looking really good but not the body part and needs to work on texture and lighting.

Show the creature from different angle and have any reference image?
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Postby cool_animator » 16 Mar 2006, 22:38

scandal as ashras said, i also like to see the model from different angles.
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Postby shailesh » 17 Mar 2006, 10:35

Hi scandal,
In a first look ur model is looking nice. Head part is looking good but as I think in a lower front teeth,
gum part will come first. Right now we r not seeing any gum part in lower jaw . R u planning to work on body part? b'coz as I think acording to head details, u should give more details on body.
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Postby madelgado » 18 Mar 2006, 21:43

Hello!

The model is good, the head is very nice, but the body have low details.

And the texture need more work.

Godd model!

Bye!
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Postby stranger » 19 Mar 2006, 08:39

good work scandal...
here are my critics.. :)

1. U need to work on jaw. it looks flat but if it is a part of design..then its good but i dont think that it is a part of design coz it is looking very angular and square shape.
2. work on the upper part of the eye. (eye brow area)..its look so thin and flat...pull some points of forehead area.
3. According to shailesh..Gum part is needed.
4. Horns cud be more thick..if it is not a part of design.. :)
5. body needs more details accoding to head.
follow some refrences for head and mouth details..mouth details are much important...
like to see ur next update.. :)
overall nice effort...and good start.
keep posting.
all the best !!

:)
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